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10/25/2021, 9:08 AM
New Song: "Work In Progress"
This is a song about being a work in progress and perhaps never reaching the desired destination but trying to enjoy the ride along the way. I hope you enjoy it. WORK IN PROGRESS
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10/29/2021, 7:40 PM
Excellent theme/subject matter, Richard. We're all on a journey, and so a work in progress.. Much improvement on the new mix, if you turn up the bass, that might help...hearing this much better now... rock on, Steve
10/28/2021, 9:18 PM
That rocks, Richard. Great song concept. The mix is a little too guitar heavy for my ear, though you've got a killer tone. I also liked how you held that second vocal back until the second chorus - it built it up nicely. An enjoyable listen.
10/28/2021, 4:30 PM
I tell folks all the time that they shouldn't judge me because God is still working on me. Great song concept. One that we (all of us mere mortals) can relate to. Good song structure and the guitar work is superb. I'm a little concerned about the vocal mix in some areas of the song. They seem to get lost in the music in some spots but not all. You might try panning them slightly to one side to add clarity of the lyrics. Just a suggestion. But overall, I love this song. I can relate! Much Respect, Stoneman
10/28/2021, 7:06 AM
Thanks so much for that generous comment. I put a lot of work into that song. A critique like yours makes it all worth it. Thanks for taking the time to stop and smell the music!
10/27/2021, 11:54 AM
This is great, Richard. I legitimately like how distant the vocals are, yet they come in clear thanks to solid mixing. Great harmonies, and that's one great tone on the rhythm guitar. I dig it.